Based on an example AQA Language P1 Q5, this descriptive is about the beach, but it could be amended to cover some of the more specific past paper examples. This descriptive includes an array of language features, sophisticated vocabulary, punctuation for effect, ISPACED for varied sentences, etc.
Students found this resource useful and we annotated key features that they previously struggled with such as varying sentence starters, using show don’t tell and including a range of figurative language.
It could potentially be used for Eduqas/Edexcel as an example as the model an its features are still useful.
As always, feel free to tweak or edit!
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