2 model narratives about a disagreement and 2 model descriptions about a very hot place.
They have all been written deliberately to try and meet the AQA assessment objectives.
Both the descriptions and the narratives employ the drop, shift, method, leave structure and include an object as a motif while also including a single sentence paragraph after every long paragraph to further demonstrate how the responses have been deliberately crafted and structured for effect. Ambitious vocabulary is sustained and advanced punctuation is used for effect.
Also contains structured prompts to help students craft their sentences.
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