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Having waited for the Government to produce their own Y1, Y3, Y4 and Y5 age related expectation writing exemplifications I decided to make our own for my school. These are used to assess pieces of work by highlighting areas they have demonstrated to show they are at age related expectations. I have also included the Y2 and Y6 exemplification materials so it can be rolled out to the whole of the school.

This is a three week unit based on the book The Man Who Walked Between the Two Towers by Mordicai Gerstein. This retells the events leading up when Phillippe Petit walked on a tight rope between the twin towers in New York. It is a great book for modelling suspense and raising key issues such as the attack on the twin towers. This unit has two outcomes which are persuasive debate and autobiography writing. Pupils love this unit as they get so engaged by the dare devil Phillippe Petit. I have listed the learning objectives for all of the lessons below. Also I have included all of the worksheets, PowerPoints, links and resources you will need to teach this unit straight away. Stimulate & Generate LOs • To use inference to generate questions and research for relevant information • To write using expanded noun phrases • To write to persuade in a subjunctive form • To build suspense in a first person recount • To explore the character’s feelings and emotions through drama Cycle 1 - Capture, Sift & Sort • To be able to identify features of a text type Create, Refine & Evaluate • To generate points to justify my opinion in a debate • To use an appropriate form and modelled text to shape my writing • To use agreed success criteria to evaluate and edit to improve my writing • Reading LO To justify my opinion of what I have read through a debate Cycle 2 - Capture, Sift & Sort • To be able to identify features of a text type Create, Refine & Evaluate • To select and organise relevant points when planning for my writing • To write to inform using an appropriate format • To use agreed success criteria to evaluate my writing and edit to improve Stimulate and generate = This usually starts with a hook to interest the class where the class realise who they are going to write for so they have a clear purpose and audience. Activities can include reading excellent model texts, drama or researching more about the author or the content of the book. Capture, sift and sort = This is the part of the unit where pupils look at key features, practise skills they will need in order to complete the final piece or new learning for objectives they have not learnt yet. Create, refine, evaluate = This is where you bring all you have learnt together and plan the final piece

This is a 2 and a half week unit of work which focuses upon writing a persuasive letter to a famous footballer to stop them from releasing thousands of balloons when they open a supermarket. The main character is a boy called Finn who is trying to save the dolphins that swim near his Scottish seaside house. He discovers they eat them as they look like jellyfish and this can have very dangerous consequences. The unit is great for looking at plastic pollution in our seas and explores some interesting subjects as his Mum is rumoured to be a Selkie. The author is Elizabeth Laird and she writes very descriptive, funny and engaging stories that children love. The end written piece is an opportunity to generate a great piece of writing as there is a well-structured plan to support your less able pupils. My class have always loved this unit as the story is great and they get very interested in how they can improve awareness about plastic pollution in our oceans. I have included all the resources including worksheets and displays so you can start using this straight away. The learning objectives for this unit are; Stimulate & Generate • • To locate and retrieve information using skimming, scanning • To retrieve and record information from non-fiction • To discuss words and phrases that capture the reader’s interest and imagination • To draw sound inferences, supported through reference to the text • To identify how language, contribute to meaning • To identify key points of an argument • To make persuasive statements • To write a balanced argument • To write persuasive statements Capture, Sift and Sort • To find the key features of a persuasive letter • To use a variety of conjunctions • To write a cohesive paragraph • To write convincing conclusions Create, Refine and Evaluate • To plan a letter written as a character in a story • To write and edit a letter written as a character in a story This unit of work uses the 3-stage planning process of: • Stimulate and Generate • Capture, Sift and Sort • Create, Refine and Evaluate Stimulate and Generate = This usually starts with a hook to interest the class where the class realise who they are going to write for so they have a clear purpose and audience. Activities can include reading excellent model texts, drama or researching more about the author or the content of the book. Capture, Sift and Sort = This is the part of the unit where pupils look at key features, practise skills they will need in order to complete the final piece or new learning for objectives they have not learnt yet. Create, Refine and Evaluate = This is where you bring all you have learnt together and plan the final piece before you write it and then edit it to improve the piece. This can include self, peer or teacher led reviewing.

This is a 3 week unit of work that is aimed at a year 4 and 5 class. The 3 week unit builds the pupils skills through drama and targeted lessons to give them the skills to write an excellent newspaper article. I have included all the resources you need to teach this today. The pupils in my class have always loved this unit and have never failed to create outstanding pieces of work from it. For a great hook I have also been known to dress up as a gorilla and run through the school the first day of teaching this unit. The learning objectives for the unit are : • To write a newspaper report • To write common themes of the books of author Anthony Browne • To write a job description • To explore characters through role-play • To explore the characters feelings and motivations in the story • To raise questions for different audiences • To understand the features of newspapers reports • To identify the features of newspapers reports • To identify the author’s style and use of language • To use more descriptive verbs instead of using said • To identify the differences between direct and reported speech then to convert direct speech into reported speech • To write cohesive paragraphs • To plan the introduction to a newspaper article including writing a catchy headline • To draft and then write a newspaper article • To write a newspaper article This unit of work uses the 3 stage planning process of: • Stimulate and generate • Capture, sift and sort • Create, refine and evaluate Stimulate and generate = This usually starts with a hook to interest the class where the class realise who they are going to write for so they have a clear purpose and audience. Activities can include reading excellent model texts, drama or researching more about the author or the content of the book. Capture, sift and sort = This is the part of the unit where pupils look at key features, practise skills they will need in order to complete the final piece or new learning for objectives they have not learnt yet. Create, refine, evaluate = This is where you bring all you have learnt together and plan the final piece before you write it and then edit it to improve the piece. This can include self, peer or teacher led reviewing.

There are 34 crucial terms for pupils aged 7 to 11 explained with examples. They are saved onto a PowerPoint for ease of use and quick reference when you are teaching. Some of the key terms are verbs (both active and passive), adverbs, connectives, clause, paragraph, personification, similes, metaphors and many more.

This is a 6 week resource for morning maths when pupils come into school. It includes adding / subtracting decimals mentally, finding missing numbers and word problems.

This is a whole school tracking AFL tracking system for Reading. Each year group's required objectives are broken down into 3 phases as it is using the Hampshire phase model for the new curriculum. There is a tracking sheet for year 1 to year 6 created using Excel.

This is a bundle of success criteria, that I use for the end of units. There is a column for both pupils and teachers as the expectation is pupils use the assessment tool to self assess their own work. The success criteria include: Biographies Descriptive Writing Diary Extracts Explanation Texts Instructions - Recipes Information Texts Newspaper Reports Non-Chronological Reports Persuasive Writing Play Scripts Poetry Poster - Advertisement Settings

This is a 3 and 1/2 week unit of work that is based on the book 'Street Child' by Berlie Doherty. The book tells the story about Dr Barnados and how the ragged schools were created through the eyes of an orphan Jim. Every time I have taught this unit there has been a special atmosphere as pupils have lots of ideas to discuss philosophical and moral issues and realise how lucky they are to be alive today in England. The end of the unit has two possible choices which are either writing as Jim in a diary extract or an alternative ending to the story. The learning objectives for this unit of work are; • To write a diary extract as a poor Victorian child. • To find and improve adverbs in a piece of text. • To make a freeze-frame to show what characters are feeling in a story. • To describe a character from a novel. • To write as a character from a novel. • To convey character by using colloquialism (slang). • To understand how a character from a novel feels. + Write expanded noun phrases. • To write a list poem. • To describe a character from a novel. • To make a key scene into a freeze frame, considering the characters feelings and emotions. • To map the story of a novel. • To map out a characters journey and feelings throughout a novel. • To find key information about Dr Barnardos. • To write complex sentences. • To identify cohesive devices for paragraphs. + I can describe the effect created by different cohesive devices • To plan a diary extract. OR To plan an alternative ending. • To write a diary extract. OR To write an alternative ending. This unit of work uses the 3 stage planning process of: • Stimulate and generate • Capture, sift and sort • Create, refine and evaluate Stimulate and generate = This usually starts with a hook to interest the class where the class realise who they are going to write for so they have a clear purpose and audience. Activities can include reading excellent model texts, drama or researching more about the author or the content of the book. Capture, sift and sort = This is the part of the unit where pupils look at key features, practise skills they will need in order to complete the final piece or new learning for objectives they have not learnt yet. Create, refine, evaluate = This is where you bring all you have learnt together and plan the final piece before you write it and then edit it to improve the piece. This can include self, peer or teacher led reviewing.

This is an assessment table which for all year Primary year groups that includes the following groups; Whole class Boys Girls SEN Pupil Premium EAL Traveller Prior Attainment Group Below Prior Attainment Group ARE Prior Attainment Group GDS There is another table which also allows you to track the progress of pupils in the groups; Prior Attainment Group Below, Prior Attainment Group ARE and Prior Attainment Group GDS. This is very important if you want to prove your school is making better than expected progress.

This is a display which is eye catching as well as useful to have displayed all year round. It reminds pupils the importance of considering the best possible conjunction to use each time they want to write and. It has an explanation why pupils should try to only use and in lists furthermore a list of possible alternative words for pupils to use.

Simple mnemonics really help pupils to remember key information they need to write great advertisements. This one is: SEAQAB S logan E xaggeration A lliteration Q uestions A djectives B enefits This display has an explanation for each part and it has 13 pages which include large letters to display the SEAQAB mnemonic clearly on your wall.

This is a shades of meaning display I made for synonyms of good, bad, said, scared and walked. I have also include blank versions in green, orange, red, purple and blue so you can create your own.

This is a word mat with synonyms for: • Good • Bad • Happy • Sad • Fast • Slow Each word has 40 different synonyms which allows pupils to build their vocabulary as these are commonly used words.

This is a sentence starter display for ADD SPICES which stands for: • Adverbs • Drop in clause • Describing word • Similes • Preposition • Ing word • Connective • Ed word • Sub-ordinate clause There is an explanation next to each spice jar which has the first letter of the acronym. This is a great display to have up all year round as a visual reminder to your class.

This is a word mat of words with the prefix anti. This is targeted at years 3 and 4 as it is part of the spelling curriculum. This is a useful resource for pupils to use to improve their spellings as well as a useful tool to improve their word choices and quality of their writing. It has two versions; one with colour and the other just in black and white to save on printing costs.

This is a word mat of words with the prefix il. This is targeted at years 3 and 4 as it is part of the spelling curriculum. This is a useful resource for pupils to use to improve their spellings as well as a useful tool to improve their word choices and quality of their writing. It has two versions; one with colour and the other just in black and white to save on printing costs.

This is a word mat of words with the prefix inter. This is targeted at years 3 and 4 as it is part of the spelling curriculum. This is a useful resource for pupils to use to improve their spellings as well as a useful tool to improve their word choices and quality of their writing. It has two versions; one with colour and the other just in black and white to save on printing costs.