A little collection of short term planning.
Own editing and responding from Friday’s writing. Share comments and improvements. Shared read next two chapters. What is a written reflection? Is it personal? What makes a diary different to a story?
WALT: edit and improve a piece of diary style writing Individually rewrite and improve own diary entry. Show paragraphing and make at least three improvements.
Bl/Y: Link ideas between parahraphs.
Or/Gr: DAWB and ed-ing-ly openers.
Shared read up to Bradley’s meeting with Carla. What might Carla think about Bradley and his behavior? What notes might she make? (Formal or informal) Share examples. Model write into formal sentences. What would she plan to do to help him? (Make suggestions) WALT: write in a formal style as a character
Indiv write Carla’s report in a formal style. Shared write intro.
Bl/Y: Link ideas using connectives DAWB
Orange: paragraphing and formal language choices.
Red: 5 accurate sentences.
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