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Here is a story loaded with twenty big
words. Can you restate it in different words
(paraphrase it)?
I’ve included my paraphrase of it.

What Macy did to improve New York City

I’m a New Yorker from New York City, but I freely admit with
candor the flagrant turbulent history of stores here in the 19th
century. Spurious goods were offered to obtuse gullible shoppers.
However; I want to exonerate Macy, the benevolent founder of a famous
department store chain. His original facility in lower Manhattan tempered
the whole tenure of commerce in the city. He ended many archaic practices.
He renounced unfairness and endorsed treating customers well.
His stock was in compliance with his principles. Not that he was rigid.
He was partial malleable to always somehow making a profit.

What Macy did to improve New York City

I’m a New Yorker from New York City, but I freely admit with open
honestly the outrageous chaotic history of stores here in the 19th
century. Deceptive goods were offered to dim witted trickable shoppers.
However; I want to clear the name of Macy, the kindly creator of a famous
department store chain. His original location in lower Manhattan changed
the whole atmosphere of trade in the city. He ended many outmoded practices.
He denounce unfairness and promoted treating customers well.
His merchandise was in line with his standards. Not that he was unbending.
He was somewhat opened to always somehow making a profit.